Haiku for today

Hangs a matchstick blind

with harsh lines that split the sky —

Pixilated view

(I don’t like the word “hangs.” Suggestions?)

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One thought on “Haiku for today

  1. How about “Leaves”? Don't know—it's been awhile since I've done the poetry thing. Did you know that I was in the Literary Club in High School? hehe…I was such a dork…but I loved it! 🙂

    I know I don't post often—I'll get one up there real soon. 🙂 Thanks for your encouragement, though. I'm glad that we can stay in touch in the blogosphere. 🙂 Hope your classes are going well and that you're keeping Southern cool.

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